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Takayoshi
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| Subject: Kobayashi Uchiha Complete Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:17 pm | |
| Character Name: Kobayashi Uchiha Titles/Other Names: Bastardo, Koba, The Dragon Age: 16 Species: Human Gender: Male Appearance: Kobayashi is a slim teenage boy, he is a rather tall teen he is one of the tallest Uchiha in the village, however he is not lanky he has some hidden muscle that wouldn't be obvious unless he was shirtless or flexing as hard as he can. He has long luxurious onyx hair that is to some degree spiky, it is usually quaffed and has a silky texture it hangs in front of his ears. His eyes are a very deep black one would believe that Kobayashi had one large pupil in both eyes they also have what some refer to as a demented glint that appears when he is in battle or on the verge of taking a life. For the most part Kobayashi has a calm care free demeanor and a fresh young face, he tends to let his shoulders and arms hang freely. The man has a sharp chin and thin lips and a small nose to match. He usually wears his soldier, consisting of a white shirt, a gray waistcoat and a long blue coat with the uchiha clan insignia on the back and a dragon insignia on the lapel. He leaves the coat front open despite it's golden buttons and facets, the sleeves on the coat are rolled up below the elbow, showing purplish red wrist bands. He also wears dark blue trousers and knee-high black boots that have sharpened steel tips on them. Personality: Kobayashi's personality can be summed up as eccentric, he often displays himself as a cool-headed, though lazy and bored individual. He can be described as being rather depressing, showing dislike in many things yet little interest in activities that he does enjoy or even his own future. Furthermore, Koba has shown that he is a pessimistic, believing that "heroes" do not exist; rather, he believes that surviving in the world would only come out of the individual's own power. He is empathetic to few, and dangerously intelligent there is no limit to how far he will go to create an equal world for all to live in, by that he wants to empower the weak so they become formidable foes with the strong. He believe that if all goes are within reach and easily attainable then that would be the same as having no goals, Kobayashi wants to unite the world through struggle as struggle is the only cure for weakness. In combat Koba is refereed to as the bastard due to his sadistic and uncaring nature he loves a challenge, he longs for an equal or dare I say it someone stronger than he. He has no problem with using people to achieve his goals, he does not have allies only temporary alliances and by temporary it means if you get in Kobayashi's way during a mission or in combat he will not hesitate to snap your neck. Kobayashi often sports a wide grin and a tendency to laugh giddily about the dangerous event. He also displays more evident signs of arrogance and superiority towards his opponents. Koba often boasts about his strength and speaks to his opponents in a more mocking tone. Nevertheless, Koba retains a carefree attitude during battle. He also prefers not to participate in most of his Clan's special activities that involves leisurely activities. However, he will cooperate if necessary with little to no arguments, save for perhaps a few minor complaints. At the same time, he will often disregard his associates and act out on his own. While focused on an objective, Kobayashi is willing to use any method possible to make his tasks quicker and easier, if that means to kill a civilian to keep them quite then that is what he will do,displaying additional traits of ruthlessness. He is also a natural born leader he can command people with his murderous aura and cold stare. He has an authoritative voice and an imposing presence. Kobayashi is efficient and will skip sleep and eating to stalk a target or set up and ambush, he is almost machine like when he needs to complete a task of his own choosing or an act that he deems important. He also has an over inflated ego and too much self purpose he knows himself to be the most dangerous Uchiha and that is saying a lot, he plans to use the clan in his ultimate goal of uniting the world under his iron fist. He is very in control of his emotions but at times his mask of sanity can slip. Background/History: - Birth:
July twenty-second 16 long years ago, a man that would greatly impact the world would be born the Kobayashi Uchiha. He would mark a new era in bloodshed. After twelve hours of a rather intense labor, a baby boy was born into the world, the first and only child of Kaneda Uchiha and Yukiyo Uchiha would be born. The parents of this child had chosen the names in advance, and as the firstborn boy, he was dubbed Kobayashi Uchiha, his name meant small forest and this was used as a show of good faith to the senju clan seeing as that this boy was the son of the ambassador to the Uchiha's rivals. At first, he seemed like a normal boy, but as everyone waited anxiously for his first cry as his lungs filled with air, it never occurred. Instead what appeared to be a crooked smile crossed his face. He would spend very little time in the birthing clinic located deep inside the Uchiha compound, he was already much more developed than the average child which the doctors found to be an anomaly.
- Early Life:
At the age of 5 Kobayahsi had begun spending a lot of time in the large woods that surrounding the uchiha district, these woods were filled with a wide array of wild life many of which were dangerous but this was not a factor in the young child's mind. Lately he had been observing a family of foxes, but every time he had attempted to get close the largest fox would begin to hiss and posture itself at young koba this had bothered him to no end; He just wanted to see the little foes. He went home defeated most days and soon he realized that the foxes were growing up and he would not be able to see them in their cutest state so he decided that he would make sure that the mother would not get in his way. The next day Kobayashi woke up at the crack of dawn and went into his father medical cabinet and removed his razor blade from his shaving kit, the boy trotted down into the forest and found the foxes den the mother was stationed outside of the fallen tree it's ears perked up immediately as Koba was making his way down the beaten path he traversed most days. "Look ms.fox I am not here to cause any trouble, I just want to see the fox cubs." he said with a smile, the animal began hissing at him. "So you want to do this the hard-way?" He removed the razor blade from his kimono and slowly approached the mother fox, "If you want to fight me I am more then prepared." he was staring the fox in the eyes, the animal took off at full speed towards Kobayashi , but the boy was not effected it had lunged at him and he tried to step out of it's way but it was already on top of him. The creature was snarling biting his skull and clawing at him but Kobayashi was still unaffected he plunged the razor into the animal's warm underbelly and slashed downward. The contents of the animal had been spilled all over the boy he was covered in guts and blood it would have been a truly terrifying scene to the average child but Koba found it to be a minor hindrance in his plan. He huffed and tossed the animal's carcass off of him he continued on to the den, Looking down into the dead tree's trunk he saw three little foxes "awww so cute!" he said to out loud. He reached inside and tried to grab one but it bit his hand and begun snarling at the child. "Why did you do that!" Kobayashi begun crying. "if you want to be mean to me so be it!" he pulled the first fox out and slashed it's stomach open as well he yanked out the animals intestines and tossed them aside they made a strange wet splat that made kobayashi laugh. He grabbed the next one and continued the processes of gutting the creatures, he had killed the 3rd in the same fashion, he looked down at his blood stained hands and rubbed them onto his face so he would look like the clown in the story books that mama had read to him. Koba stood and walked back to his house, upon entering he heard his mother scream and fall to the ground his father ran into the room and asked why he was covered in blood. "I went and played with the foxes!" he said excitedly. His father gave him a hard long look, "Son, I think it is time that you begin your time at the Uchiha academy, today you have made me the happiest father on earth" Kaneda Uchiha said with an exuberant smile.That was when he would be forced to train for months on end in remote regions of the Uchiha territory where he learned that life was eat, or be eaten.
- Uchiha Academy/Squad days :
The years within the Academy had been uneventful for Koba. Everyone mocked him during class and breaks. They all found that Koba was a ‘special’ case; ‘special’ as in ‘strange’ or ‘weird’.Koba ignored those classmates of his, but with every single day, it seemed that their voices were finally reaching out for Koba and it became more and more difficult for him to keep his anger inside. He wouldn't start a fight; since that would disgrace his parents; which would make the ‘bullying’ situation even worse. During these times, he trained alone; he didn't want anyone near him, even if they didn't have any ill intentions. The trust he had for the uchiha people had slowly reduced to zero. The boy was at the top of the class Taijutsu and Tactical Studies he was above average for most of the other categories as well so he assumed that the other children were simply jealous of him.
If he wasn't training, he was playing with himself.He was an odd child that would spend his alone time sitting on the sidewalk of his house, gazing out at the open, blue sky, which was as bright as his own eyes, on sunny days, that is. The sky was the only thing he could even relate to in the world, if it was raining, he would prefer to train than sit on the sidewalk to gaze up at the sky. He also has a favorite training location, where he’s bothered by no one.After training for 6 hours he would spend another 5 hours studying a series of hand picked texts, designed to teach Military history, Military tactics and other fundamental knowledge a future Shinobi general and tactician would need to know. It’s a shame that Koba turned out to be like this; he was a genius surrounded by imbeciles and had isolated himself from society. He was wondering to himself if he even had to go through the trouble of having his classmates, acknowledge him. To see what he’s capable of and that he’s not actually any different from the other person. With that in mind, he graduated from the Academy.
Koba had finally entered his preteen years. Assigned to his squad, he heads out into the open world, ready to become a full-fledged Shinobi, but for what cause? He had given up on having other people acknowledge his existence. Right now, the only path that he sees in front of himself is the path to live for nothing. Everyone around him is just a mere illusion. It might even be said that he partially isolates himself from reality instead of society. During the time with his Squad, he doesn't say anything at all, not to his regular teammates, at least. The Sensei, however, respects him the way he is right now. Though Koba doesn't know why, he doesn't ask any questions, since not many people respect him. In total, three people respect him right now. With the thought of the probability of leaving the clan once he has finally matured remaining in the back of his head, he’s still in doubt.
After performing missions day after day, he had been dismissed on another mission, that was supposedly a higher ranked missions than those he and his squad have gone on before; the danger within the mission is possibly encountering other Shinobi that are hostile and will do whatever it takes to takes down their opponent, since there is something that they hide from other people there, a secret known only among themselves; a possible threat to the Shinobi World, as some had said. But, Koba doesn't seem to believe that story at all, but since he has an urge to fight strong opponents, he might as well tag along instead of refusing and picking a fight with his squad members.
They all walked over the path that was headed into the destination crossed onto the map they were carrying with them; the destination where the secret was hidden from all inhabitants of this world. With each and every step that they took, the bushes made a strange sound as if someone was hiding in them. Someone could possibly be following them and be planning to ambush them later. Koba heard the bushes making a strange sound as well, his other squad members all stopped moving, the enemy behind the bushes seemed to have stopped moving as well. Koba shifted his eyes over into that certain direction and pulled a shuriken out of his ninja pouch. He narrowed his eyes, throwing the shuriken exactly through the small branches of the bush, scraping the opponent’s shoulder. The opponent eventually jumped out since he had realized that he was noticed.
The moment that one single opponent hit the ground, they were suddenly surrounded by four more of them; one of them being the leader, thus five in total. ”What do you seek here,uchiha scum.” the unknown figure asked them as an awkward silence filled the air, no one knowing what to say to them, except for their Sensei. ”For the secret that you have kept hidden from us for so long.” he said without hesitation, wondering how they were going to react. One of the opponent’s clenched his fists and charged towards the squad, Koba immediately taking action due to his urge to fight someone, grabbed his arm and twisted it the wrong way, thus easily breaking it and to finish it stepped on his back in one swift motion, placed his other feet on the back of the opponent’s head and slammed it in the ground as a result, crushing the opponents face knocking him out cold. His bright eyes looked uninterested at the other few opponents left as they looked at Koba in awe. During those movements, they were unaware that they were dealing with an inhuman mortal.
One of the opponents began smirking and eventually a sign of laughter escaped through his lips, aimed at Koba. “An Uchiha.. No, outcast. Right?” He said, referring to Koba's silence during the journey. Koba’s eyes widened at the moment he said outcast and without thinking rushed into the one that said he was an outcast. Though due to his recklessness, he got pinned to the ground and got a kunai stabbed a few centimeters form his heart; any to the side and he’d be history. Before that, the Sensei warned him not to charge in, but he didn't listen. He screamed at the moment the kunai was stabbed into his back, pushing his teeth firmly together to try and ease the pain. His breathing suddenly got a lot heavier. The opponents merely laughed and looked down upon him, merely because of his silence? The Sensei and the other squad members engaged into the fight this time as well as Koba slowly made it up to his feet. His heavy breathing continued as the opponent that stabbed him and called him an outcast looked at him with a wide smirk, as in “What’s wrong? Too weak?”. Slowly but surely, Koba's eyes opened and revealed the first stage of the Sharingan swirling around within his eyes.
--Few minute time skip—
The opponents had all been defeated, before the Sharingan disappeared out of his eyes, he revealed the Sharingan to his Sensei and squad members. The eyes seemed to be filled with hatred towards the Squad members, though not towards the Sensei. This was what worried the Sensei. And so, they continued their mission and their road to become even stronger Shinobi.
- New World Order:
Over the next few weeks, Koba's father taught him how to control his first tome, and once he could activate it at will, he became informed of his bloodlines primary directive. Koba's father informed him that his branch of the uchiha clan had formed an underground organization know as the dragons of the sharingan, they were to keep the bloodline pure and to one day take over the world and instill the dragon orders self evident beliefs these were as follows: First and foremost protect the uchiha bloodline, that means reclaiming sharingan that have been implanted into outsiders, the second was to establish the Uchiha's dominance over all other clans and enslave them becoming the leaders of the free world, in short they were Assassins. Koba's father and mother, and their father and mother before them systematically assassinated members of rival clans and even other uchiha around the fire country. They took positions of power as emissary's so they can go undetected for their murders, and by doing so they planned on gradually destroying the clans they considered out to destroy them. Although uncomfortable with the concept of working for the uchiha clan as a lapdog, Koba took his orders as a member of his clan, and began to assassinate enemies when ordered. His first kill wasn't until a year after he obtained his soldier position. His father came to him one evening, handing him a scroll and left without saying a word. It was a complete report on the combat ability and habits of Reisha Senju. Even when to strike and how to execute him to allow them to frame his brother. Koba was unsure about the mission but he would never turn down an opportunity to kill. He easily caught the man off-guard he pierced the mans and began to taunt him he would torture the man slowly for breathing his air. Because of this lapse in defense, Reisha took advantage of the opportunity, binding Koba with wooden restraints that extended from the ground at his feet. He created a spear out of wood and plunged it towards Koba's spine. Using his fire release, Koba created a blast that shattered his binds. While the blast was too late to destroy the spear, it knocked it off-target, causing it to drive into his left shoulder blade. Koba let out a laugh, and his vision changed again. He had unlocked his second Tomoe. Using his improved vision, Koba dodged the incoming attacks and landed a punch directly into the man's chest, releasing an explosive amount of force as the blow hit, turning the Senju into nothing more than a husk. Although he hadn't killed him in the way he was ordered to do so, the kill earned him a new found respect among the uchiha and a high ranking role within the Dragon's association. He saw the organizations actions as bullying and glorified stupidity he knew that a single bloodline throughout the world would create weakness he wanted to unite the shinobi world under one banner and this is how he would do it first he would need to take his place as leader of the organization so that he could branch out into other parts of the world and recruit non uchiha to his cause.
Thanks to his efforts, he had once again gotten one step closer to becoming the messiah that this world needed, but he was not stopping here. He was willing to sacrifice anything to get stronger. His hatred in these past years had grown enough, that anything that comes in his path would be obliterated by his own hand.
No matter which weather conditions, Koba continued moving forwards. He disliked the idea of moving backwards, since he didn't want to waste any time becoming stronger. During these times, he had already reached the strength that can rival that of a clan elder. Behind him on the path were lifeless bodies, which is the proof that he had been continuously fighting to get stronger and achieve higher levels of his Sharingan. He felt like he was almost there, but still couldn't reach it. Something was blocking his path. Was there a barrier he had to breach in order to unlock that power? At least it felt that way.
Lighting struck the ground as trees fell over and burned completely to ashes, though nothing seemed to shock Koba anymore. His once bright eyes had a lifeless, annoyed and hateful expression within them, the light that was once seen in his eyes before the hatred kicked in was now completely gone, as if he had forever stepped into the darkness of no return. Tonight he would be heading to an induction ceremony, his father would also be taking the mantle as head of the Dragons of the Uchiha tonight.
After arriving at the location of the ceremony, he quietly took his seat in the back of the room he took note of the fact that there were no sentries or guards in the room, and the area was hidden deep within the woods. In the front of the room was a throne, it was not over the top but certainly lavish, how sad he thought to himself. He sat still and watched with interest as he began calculating his hostile takeover he was next in line for the throne and there were about 7 people in the room not including himself, only his father and himself had sharingan past one tome so this would be a cinch the hardest part would be taking out his father, he came to the conclusion that he would hug his father and slide a kunai in between his ribs. The new addition to the order was sitting patiently, but kobayashi could see the nervousness in his eyes and in his jittery lip biting, he stared at the barley 15 year old and relished the boys innocence, the kid had never taken a life before boy he was in for a surprise tonight Kobayashi started to chuckle to himself he watched as the boy received a ring and a blue uniform that matched the one kobayashi was currently wearing. The kid looked like he was on the verge of passing out from excitement he turned red and started smiling like a proud father, everyone in the room had started clapping for the young man including Koba. Now for the main event an elderly gentlemen stood at the front of the room the man was wearing a regal robe that had the dragon's mark on the back it was gold and had white trim on it, the man opened his mouth "Today we are here to make the official coronation of Rīdādoragon Kaneda Uchiha" everyone began to clap excluding Koba, his father had begun to the front of the room, the elderly man stood for him and removed the robe and the crown from his body, he held the garb out in Kaneda Uchiha's direction "Do you Accept the title of Rīdādoragon?" there was a short pause "Yes, I do" said Koba's father. He took the crown out of the mans hands and put it on his head he then tossed on the robe and gave a smug look to the small audience, everyone had begun to clap this time including Kobayashi who made eye contact with his father. For a brief second Koba returned the smug look and stood up he too was making his way to the front of the room to "congratulate his father" when he arrived his father had teary eyes, 'Disgusting' he thought to himself, Koba went in for a hug and his father gladly reciprocated the action, they were in each others embrace for a long while Koba reached into his ninja pouch and pulled out a kunai, he looked into his fathers eyes one last time and whispered "You poor bastard." The blade was now buried inside his fathers heart, the man let out a feral screech before he hit the ground with a thud. The clapping stopped and most people in the room were confused at this moment Kobayashi let his voice be known " I am the Rīdādoragon, from today on this organization will be known as Byōdō, you are not here to serve the uchiha you are here to serve me, if you oppose me you will die so I suggest you join the bandwagon before I end you. the room was silent but it was broken by the new boy "I swear my alliance to you Rīdādoragon!" there was another pause but the this time more voices rang out and they were all carrying the message of allegiance to Kobayashi the last dragon.
Exhausted from his hostile takeover. It felt like his body was ready to just fall apart, once he arrived at his empty home he hopped directly into his bed. During his sleep, he had "nightmares" haunting him. The memories of the past still hadn't left him, apparently. Slowly but surely, the already dark sky became darker as grey clouds rolled into the night sky, within minutes rain had started pouring down and lightning strikes were hitting the ground with incredible force. The path that he walks is long. But what will wait for him at the end of that path?
Clan: Uchiha Rank: Stealth Soldier Tier: S-3 KKG: Sharingan, Blaze Release Items: 2 tome Sharingan Abilities/Perks: Cold Blooded: Killing with no remorse/ Killing on a whim Murderous Aura: Strike crippling fear in all social threads for 3 posts with other characters that are 3 ranks or lower.
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| Subject: Re: Kobayashi Uchiha Complete Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:14 pm | |
| There are a couple things wrong here:
1. We don't use system of Genin, Chuunin, so on, edit history to fit that fact
2. As you now know, you can't start with tomoe 3, tomoe 2 max, have to describe training in history which I'm sure is there, but also have to spend 600 EXP out of starting pool for it, so account for that.
3. Your history is good, but the range of length and quality of that combined with the lacking in your personality and appearance just doesn't cut it for S Rank. I will give A-2 max.
Please take into account these 3 things and edit. Thank you!
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| Subject: Re: Kobayashi Uchiha Complete Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:28 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kobayashi Uchiha Complete Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:11 pm | |
| It has come to my attention that I'm an absolute moron and even if the History is decent, every other part doesn't deserve A-2. Not even close. I will give it a max of B-2, unless you edit. | |
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