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| Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] | |
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Ryu Yamazaki
Elements : Wind
| Subject: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 9:08 am | |
| Name: Art of Flowers: Rose Cutter Rank: C Chakra Cost: 20 Force: Speed+Strength/2, 20 cutting power Type: Taijutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: Her hand Requirements: Level 1 Taijutsu Description: Orchid enhances a hand with chakra, giving it the properties of a blade, meaning she can slice and pierce through things as if her a hand was a sword. This technique lasts as long as Orchid wants it too, and as long as she has the available chakra. Drawbacks: None Combination with other techs: When Orchid is in her Art of the Flowers stance, she gains an additional 10 force.
Name: Art of Flowers Rank: D Chakra Cost: 0 Force: None Type: Taijutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: Self Requirements: Taijutsu Level 1, Taught by Orchid or anyone who's been taught by Orchid. Description: This is a style that has a major focus on speed, launching agile strikes meant to chip away at an opponents endurance and strike vital areas. It has a slight focus on strength. One person has commented that Orchid's fighting style reminds them of "The way a flower moves in the wind." It grants a +20 bonus in speed, and +5 in strength. Drawbacks: None Combination with other techs: When used with her other Taijutsu under the Art of Flowers title, it usually buffs the move in someway
Name: Art of Flowers: Palm of the Alyssum Rank: C Chakra Cost: 0 Force: Strength+Speed/2 Type: Tai Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: Her hand Requirements: Tai Level 1 Description: A skilled open palm strike. Gives +50 Speed. When used during her stance, this gives +15 Strength. Drawbacks: Combination with other techs: Improved during her Art of the Flowers Stance
Name: Genjutsu: Fatigue Rank: C Chakra Cost: 30 Force: None Type: Genjutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: Same as Gen Level Requirements: Gen Level 1 Description: Triggered by the sound of Orchid whistling, this Genjutsu induces heavy fatigue in the target. The technique lowers there speed by 15%.(If a decimal occurs, round down.) Drawbacks: Can be broken like every other Genjutsu. Combination with other techs: None
Name: Hiding in Flowers Technique Rank: C Chakra Cost: 30 Force: None Type: Genjutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: What the Gen Level says Requirements: Gen Level 1 Description: Triggered by Orchid snapping her fingers, once captured in the Gen, the opponent sees Orchid become surrounded by cherry blossoms, and vanish. Since they're in a genjutsu, sensing techniques will not be able to detect Orchid. Drawbacks: This only effects the target's site. She can still be heard, smelled, tasted, and felt. Combination with other techs: None
Name: Illusion of Aster Rank: C Chakra Cost: 30 Force: None Type: Genjutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: What the Gen Level says Requirements: Genjutsu Level 1 Description: Triggered by Orchid using the Ram handseal, the opponent finds themselves unable to hear Orchid. Drawbacks: Can still be found via other senses. Only makes the Target(s) not be able to hear Orchid, they'll still hear other things. Combination with other techs: None
Name: Genjutsu: Mind Boggle Rank: C Chakra Cost: 30 Force: None Type: Genjutsu Element: None Hand Signs: None Range: What the Gen Level says Requirements: Gen Level 1 Description: Triggered by Orchid pointing her finger at her target, the person trapped by this genjutsu feels that there strength has been sapped away. Since the brain has been tricked, the person cannot use there full strength. This gives a 15% reduction in Strength rounded down. Drawbacks: Can be broken like any other Genjutsu Combination with other techs: Orchid layers this with her Fatigue jutsu to cause both a reduction in speed and strength
Last edited by Ryu Yamazaki on Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:56 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
| | | Han Solo (Meme Edition)
Elements : Water/Blood Release
| Subject: Re: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:49 am | |
| Increase the cost of ALL of the Genjutsu to about 30 in Chakra for starters\
Next, Rose Cutter is listed with 100 Cutting power and is C Rank. I would like to remind you that Cutting Power is multiplied by 3 to get your force, and 300 force with a cutting attribute is pretty high for a technique that only has Lvl 1 Tai and C Ranking. I would say change it to the regular Speed+Strength/2 and have that +20 Cutting Power, which would give it a 60 buff over others.
Then, increase Rose Cutter's Chakra Cost to about 20 | |
| | | Ryu Yamazaki
Elements : Wind
| Subject: Re: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:41 pm | |
| I fixed the rest of my jutsu, but when I asked Psychosis the force about a C rank cutting jutsu, he said 75-100 was fine.. | |
| | | Han Solo (Meme Edition)
Elements : Water/Blood Release
| Subject: Re: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:49 pm | |
| Well that equals to 300 force total, I'm sure he probably didn't remember the fact that it is multiplied by 3, so I'm telling you now, 100 Cutting Force isn't okay for a C Rank Tai Lvl 1. 300 Force is too high. Please edit according to the changes I suggested above. All the other jutsu are approved | |
| | | Ryu Yamazaki
Elements : Wind
| Subject: Re: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:58 pm | |
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| | | Han Solo (Meme Edition)
Elements : Water/Blood Release
| Subject: Re: Come into my Garden[Orchid's Custom Jutsu] Thu Aug 14, 2014 1:00 pm | |
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